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Poem inspired by text for Suzette Richards' graffiti poetry contest
the celestial dancer pirouettes bending refracting weaving illuminating the crossroads of reality twisting fate in cosmic alchemy the universe yielding to her will

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Date: 4/6/2024 3:46:00 PM
wow! your poem is impressive and flows almost mystically. Your poem also has a dreamy quality to it. Loved it. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/6/2024 3:50:00 PM
Thank you. It was fun to write. I couldn't use it for the graffiti poetry contest because I changed a couple of the words

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