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The universe around me

one day at a time
I contemplate the true meaning of life
I find connection with nature


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Valerie Staton

January 26, 2019 at 10:56 PM

Very nicely written.

Line Gauthier

January 27, 2019 at 11:42 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment, Valerie.

Carole Duet

January 26, 2019 at 12:04 PM

Yes...snow always causes not only excitement for me here in the south but quiet contemplation as well. Lovely senryu, Line.

Line Gauthier

January 26, 2019 at 8:24 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carole.

John Lawless

January 25, 2019 at 6:19 PM

I always wonder if any of them are twins.

Line Gauthier

January 25, 2019 at 6:22 PM

LOL

Vladislav Raven

January 25, 2019 at 5:07 PM

Hi Line, love the content of your Senryu. I do a lot of my best thinking the rain or the snow. An excellent Senryu my friend. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Line Gauthier

January 25, 2019 at 6:23 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment, Mike.

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