The Universe

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We look up at the sky at night
There is so much to see
Planets, stars, and meteors
Then, past vision, what can be

The further back the light comes from
See deeper in the past
Worlds like ours have come and gone
Unlikely that they last

Our Earth is just a blink in time
Say just a speck of dust
Revolving with its molten core
We live here on the crust

The comets cruise our system
Held here by our sun
Some orbits go so far in space
We may not see that one

Our planets may be hot or cold
Gas or solid rock
It makes no difference in the end
As in their orbits lock

Mars there for the God of war
Venus there for love
Mercury for heat and speed
They wander up above

They take a spacing from the sun
Mercury, Venus, Earth
Mars, Jupiter and Saturn
All have different orbit girth

Uranus there, and Neptune
And with far too many jeers
Tiny Pluto scorches round
In just two fifty years

The constellations guide us
As we travel in the night
Guided to our destination
As an early caveman might

The supernova of the stars
When their life is done
Collapsing to a small white dwarf
Or huge red giant one

And so when we are dead and gone
Earth swallowed by the sun
Will those that follow wonder
If they follow anyone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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