The Unicorn Seeks

Dawning purity - Cherished with warlike fierceness, Virgins wait, prancing. © July 26, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/4/2010 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this well drawn picture. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2010 9:45:00 AM

My congratulations to you on your win Dane Ann in (Destroyer((Poet's) contest "Unicorn Haiku". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2010 7:50:00 AM

Very nice take on unicorns Dane- Ann COngrats on your win :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 7:05:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in P.D.'s Unicorn contest with this original and creative write.. enjoy another special win tonight my friend.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2010 5:42:00 PM

I can just see the lovely virgins prancing behind him. Very nice, Dane Ann. Congrats. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2010 5:37:00 PM

Congrats on the 15th place win, Dane

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2010 5:12:00 PM

Dane, CONGRTULATIONS!! and thanks for your contest entry trully enjoyed,...p.d.

Rick Parise

Date: 8/1/2010 4:07:00 PM

I love this one,Nice~Congrats to you~Rick

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/26/2010 9:52:00 AM

My Friend Dane Ann Smith ~ How lovely like a fairy tale of sorts! Best wishes in the contest I think you'll do well. I've been out of the poetry loop but I do hope to crawl back in. I've missed you! Love Laura :)