The Unhappy Tree

A high rise leafless tree,with vast branches,
                    looks courageous, bears bad and good,
                    tolerates torment,still stands straight
                           Yet,it's not happy
                  It anticipates birds,butterflies and bees
                   But no butterfly nudges and no bee kisses.
                   Anxiety increases,it cries and languishes,
                         Not aware of reason

                  A small shrub,with very few leaves, 
                    looks majestic,and ever smiling,
                  braces the most beautiful daisies.
                              It's so happy
                  Butterflies and bees encircle the flowers.
                    No rivalry,they shared the nectar.
                 Ecstasy increases,it's at the height of bliss.
                         It doesn't need a reason

                    The leafless tree envies the daisy plant,
                        yearning for the valuable reason.
                     Answered by the eternal blue sky,
"Happiness embraces you when you are ready to embrace it back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 9:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
Callus Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 4:43 PM
I like the contrast between the tree and the shrub, Supraja. The answer lies in the end line; love and happiness are available to all, but it's our attitude which can bring them out into the open. Truly enjoyed this poem. Regards // paul
Kannan Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 10:07 PM
So true Paul... Thank you so much for your support... Glad you enjoyed it...
Turner Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 2:50 PM
I'm ready right now, Supraja:) Your writing just gets better and better:)
Kannan Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:28 PM
Oh! Thank you so much for your encouraging words... It means a lot to me...
Daniel Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Wow! What a nice story, Supraja, your writing amazes me :)
Kannan Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:06 AM
So glad to hear from you Jo...Thank you so much for stopping by...
Trifiatis Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Very didactic my dearest, Supraja! A beautiful story with a clear message! Superbly written!
Kannan Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:06 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios... I am so glad you enjoyed it...
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 5:20 PM
that last line says it all. To have all that beauty and not embrace it back is so sad!! I really like this, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:05 AM
Thank you so much Andrea... I am so glad you liked it...
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