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The Undyings' Curse

Deep in the earth, a crypt of rock slumber guarded by casket locked Lips grope silence ‘ever more rasping thought, remembers whispered lore Outstretched palms the roots do clench tranquility stilled by festered stench And eyes, sleep caked, are propped ajar ignites no life, but collapsed star Burned blades sigh, Winds’ dying gasp bones brittle snap within her clasp A lonesome howl the moon does draw vigil broken, it twists its maw Upon an arena of endless stone the granite gates they’ve passed alone And entered a world of burning eyes eluded the judge of smoldering cries A faultless gait, no stumbled draw a reaping brought by scythe and claw Opal edge which shrouds a cause aberrant blade shapes nature’s laws Dictate a script, the stars can share an open secret, a language bare Steps continue, feet are drawn across gray grass, undying pawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/12/2015 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Avery!
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:55:00 AM
Congratulations... SKAT
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:12:00 AM
i just love it Avery, and I think placing second PROVES IT!!! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/1/2015 11:12:00 AM
Love this one my friend. I love dark poetry as some of my first poems were very dark ones! A7 on this gem!!!!
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 8/1/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thanks again so much!! Best, Avery
Date: 6/15/2015 7:42:00 PM
awesome win
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 6/17/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/14/2015 6:01:00 PM
The rhmye, rhythm and dark imagery just drew me right into this poem. An excellent piece, Avery. Congrats on a first place win!
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 6/17/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thanks so much! best Avery
Date: 3/24/2015 2:52:00 PM
I found the imagery quite chilling many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 6/17/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thanks a tom for your praise! Best Avery
Date: 3/24/2015 5:06:00 AM
Avery, congratulations on your first place win with this awesome poem. I think your poem is amazing, it gave me goose bumps reading it, hard to believe it would ever be given an NA, anyways for me it is a perfect 7 rating . . .
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 6/17/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thanks for your compliments! Best Avery
Date: 3/24/2015 12:48:00 AM
Avery, I now see that you got one rough welcome to PS with your first contest. I find this poem brilliant. Congrats and welcome to PS.
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Date: 3/23/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you all so much for the kind remarks!
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:18:00 PM
this is a nice win...PD
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:59:00 PM
Avery, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/16/2015 9:49:00 PM
Avery, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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