The Undyings' Curse

Deep in the earth, a crypt of rock
slumber guarded by casket locked
Lips grope silence ‘ever more
 rasping thought, remembers whispered lore
Outstretched palms the roots do clench
tranquility stilled by festered stench
And eyes, sleep caked, are propped ajar
ignites no life, but collapsed star

Burned blades sigh, Winds’ dying gasp
bones brittle snap within her clasp
A lonesome howl the moon does draw
vigil broken, it twists its maw 
Upon an arena of endless stone
the granite gates they’ve passed alone
And entered a world of burning eyes
eluded the judge of smoldering cries

A faultless gait, no stumbled draw
a reaping brought  by scythe and claw
Opal edge which shrouds a cause
aberrant blade shapes nature’s laws
Dictate a script, the stars can share
an open secret, a language bare
Steps continue, feet are drawn
across gray grass, undying pawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Avery!
A  Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Congratulations... SKAT
A   Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 1:12 AM
i just love it Avery, and I think placing second PROVES IT!!! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Love this one my friend. I love dark poetry as some of my first poems were very dark ones! A7 on this gem!!!!
Swarthout Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Thanks again so much!! Best, Avery
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:42 PM
awesome win
Swarthout Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Thanks so much!
Deschler Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 6:01 PM
The rhmye, rhythm and dark imagery just drew me right into this poem. An excellent piece, Avery. Congrats on a first place win!
Swarthout Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thanks so much! best Avery
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:52 PM
I found the imagery quite chilling many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Swarthout Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Thanks a tom for your praise! Best Avery
La France Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 5:06 AM
Avery, congratulations on your first place win with this awesome poem. I think your poem is amazing, it gave me goose bumps reading it, hard to believe it would ever be given an NA, anyways for me it is a perfect 7 rating . . .
Swarthout Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thanks for your compliments! Best Avery
Carmack Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Avery, I now see that you got one rough welcome to PS with your first contest. I find this poem brilliant. Congrats and welcome to PS.
Swarthout Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Thank you all so much for the kind remarks!
A   Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:18 PM
this is a nice win...PD
A  Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Avery, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Avery, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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