The Undressed

Like a scarf,
Your arms rest down my neck.
Slinking hands hanging gentle,
down my torso.

I feel your sharp breasts contract with heavy breathes,
down my spine.


I listen,
I feel,
Your hammer heart beat.

Tap once
Tap Twice

atop my submissive skin.

We float linear
But I jot along,

wild,

for when we fall,
laned together as man and woman.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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La France Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 1:39 PM
Jamie... wow.. this very sensual..I really like it.. and thank you for your comments on my poem "Lady" my first attempt at something like that.. Constance
Jordan Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 4:10 AM
Jamie this is very beautiful - You did an outstanding job penning this poem - God Bless
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