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The Undressed

Like a scarf, Your arms rest down my neck. Slinking hands hanging gentle, down my torso. I feel your sharp breasts contract with heavy breathes, down my spine. I listen, I feel, Your hammer heart beat. Tap once Tap Twice atop my submissive skin. We float linear But I jot along, wild, for when we fall, laned together as man and woman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/19/2008 1:39:00 PM
Jamie... wow.. this very sensual..I really like it.. and thank you for your comments on my poem "Lady" my first attempt at something like that.. Constance
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:10:00 AM
Jamie this is very beautiful - You did an outstanding job penning this poem - God Bless
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