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The Undisputed Champ

Introducing the undisputed champ - "The Fallen Star!"/ I'm aware people stare at the extremely bizarre./ I'm that "beep, beep" on your hearts radar./ This pen is metaphorically my scimitar!/ Poetry Soup says I'm cursed,/ because of the content in my verse;/ but I feel as if I'll burst,/ and it will only get worse,/ If I don't relieve this stress!/ So allow me to express/ what's on my chest/ before I become possessed! I will start clawing and fighting!/ If I don't here you say: "You make this site so much more exciting!"/ So what if I don't play nice,/ but I bring that Latino spice!/ You damn right I'm a sexy S.O.B.!? And I don't give a flip if you don't like my poetry!/ Who are you to judge me?/ You wanna hear an apology?/ For being comfortable and expressing my sexuality?/ Look I'm 32,/ and that's the difference between me and you./ I've never felt more alive!? Don't get upset with me because you're 65!/ I know you wish I would just disappear,/ because I live in today and not the day of Shakespeare!/ Don't no one read his work no more! / Yes I bring a poetic war./ Blowing up verses like C4!/ My sentences are sharp like a carnivore!/ I don't like fake individuals no way./ Why should I listen to what a hypocrit has to say?/ Someone told me to just leave it alone./ So those without sin casts the first stone!/ - I didn't think so!/ I hope your house gets blown away by a tornado!/ Sometimes my heart grows cold like an Eskimo,/ and other times dark like Edgar Allen Poe!/ Look before you start pointing fingers at me,/ and condemn my poetry./ Take a look see that others have wrote erotica too./ I can name a few./ And nothing I write is taboo!/ You just probably stay away because you have bird flu!/ So I can care less if you're my friend./ I'm just out to set a new trend!!!!

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Date: 2/1/2010 4:05:00 PM
My dear Jimmy, you're angry and I feel it in this write. I know you're just venting so feel free, let it out! Poetry is always an expression of perception of things, thoughts, etc. Whoever told you they were not impressed by your poetry, should know that someone like you do not write to impress. You speak your truth and it is what it is. Nothing less will do for someone like you. So keep on writing for us who enjoy your poems! Much love to you, always, Audrey*
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