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The Unchangeable

The situation in my country is terrifying I wish I can do something gratifying, Selfishness and corruption by leaders are annoying, No job,no food ,no water,in a land flourishing with resources and its occupants are crying, Mortality rate increases for many are lacking, Diseases,malnutrition and social vices are thriving, due to negligence,misappropriation and lack of funding, From generation to generation this parasite is spreading, And the vectors and co-vectors foster by multiplying, I`m bold,educated and ready to die,not compromising, but I have to join their party to be leading, Join their party!be like them!what am I thinking? I can`t sell my conscience because of governing, If I`m an officer,I would have risen to do general cleaning, but that era has gone,military government is damaging, while this cosmetic democracy is more disturbing, Divine intervention is sought and I`m waiting;waiting! by soaking my bed with tears daily,weeping!, Lame and paralyzed I watch the little ones,suffering, while a few biggies misuse and waste the wealth by deceiving, Hmm!hmm!I can`t take this anymore!,it is killing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/24/2013 7:23:00 PM
Olusegun, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:00:00 AM
What! This is soooooo lovely my brother. The message is so poignant. Congrats on your win my brother and fellow compatriot.
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:44:00 PM
So deep and touching. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/22/2013 8:47:00 PM
congrats on a great win Olusegun
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Date: 4/19/2012 1:32:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY AWESOME ! I enjoyed this much.
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:47:00 AM
OLUSEGUN,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this emotionally intense poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 6:12:00 PM
Somehow the repetitiveness of the verb ending make the point stronger than ever than there is no end in sight to this voilence, I think of you often and pray you are well. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:37:00 PM
congrats oluseegun on a remarkable win for this tremendous entry luv.. awesome words and lines..
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:14:00 AM
Congrats, Olusegun. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:40:00 AM
I can see why this is one of your favorites. It says so much. Congratulations
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Date: 1/31/2012 6:11:00 PM
Congrats, Olusegun. Powerful piece. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/31/2012 3:28:00 PM
Very powerful, Olusegun. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:50:00 AM
congratulations on your win Olusegun. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:44:00 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:25:00 AM
congrats Olusegun on another great win for brilliant poetry so special luv...
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:16:00 AM
There is so much emotion in this rendering Olusegun. And frustration. I couldn't help thinking as I read this, how many countries, in varying degrees, that this would apply to. So sad, but so well written. Congratulations
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:29:00 PM
OH, Olusegun. this is terribly frustrating for you and I can see that you feel really saddened by it. I know there are others like you here at Soup and I pray one day you all can enjoy the blessings of life. Keep being strong and writing. You are a light to your world.
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Date: 1/16/2012 8:53:00 AM
Good morning, Olusegun...this is is not your average every day write...it is filled with compassion for your homeland and it moves my heart so intensely..I am not even sure what country you are from (yet I have an idea). You poem is filled with compassion, frustration, and a peaceful prayerful attitude...how you pulled this rhyming scheme off so nicely with all the technical details is also proof of your craft. I feel your pain and your brothers anguish too. So very sad...I hope this will steal the show bc it is written so extraordinarily and bc it is a message that needs to be read. Gwendolen
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