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for the contest "Time" sponsored by Ink Empress

Time... is a transcendental sense of being which exists in a perpetual passing that's relative in a ceaseless motion that never moves where tomorrows vanish and today becomes past Time is an interval traveled across dimensions of lineal value of what is felt and what is unknown like the timeless sensation of a kiss measured in lengths of whispered breath and heartbeats Time is the gravity of yearning between lovers apart as eyes meet from a distance and moments become duration undivided It is the scale used when seasons change into seasons and movements are counted in days into perpetuity time is beyond our understanding that we move within using clock hands as reality as we feel what can never be touched or measured only imagined except for the unbroken space between birth and death

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Date: 3/8/2024 11:10:00 AM
- You describe time as it feels, in beautiful lines... "can never be touched or measured", Frederic - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/8/2024 11:05:00 AM
Dear frederick, profound write this is on time and i love the flow of your very meaningful poem depicting time seamlessly! So many lines stood out for me but the ending hits the most! Thank you for entering and for always supporting my contests. I appreciate this poem! Congratulations on your win too.
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Date: 3/6/2024 12:00:00 PM
This is amazing. Time is definitely the elephant in the room that everyone sees and tries to get around but can't. Blessings
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Date: 3/4/2024 8:25:00 AM
Dear Frederic, I like the way you explore the concept of time as a transcendental force, weaving together moments of love, longing, and the passage of seasons, which is profoundly moving. Your poetic words evoke a sense of awe and contemplation, showing us the intangible nature of time and the vastness of existence. This is a beautiful reflection on the mysteries of life and the unbroken space between birth and death. - Blessings, Daniel
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/5/2024 12:26:00 PM
thank you for your kindness Daniel

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