The Umbrella

The Umbrella

By Elton Camp

For a device that is so essential, it would be expected
That over the years it would’ve been finally perfected
But to get most umbrellas open often takes many tries
Punch the button as you will, but it doesn’t easily arise

And why do manufacturers produce umbrellas so small?
They keep rain off the top of your head, but that is all
When you finally get inside and into a place that’s dry
It seems not to want to stay closed no matter how you try

After only a few uses, there is little reason to have doubt
One or more sharp ribs will dangerously be sticking out
Although about the umbrella there is very much bad to say
You won’t fuss long because a wind gust will blow it away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 24, 2011 at 9:34 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Elton. Love, Carol
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March 23, 2011 at 2:57 PM
A well done poem Elton, I agree with the thought.. have a nice one...p.d.
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