The Ultimate Sin

Relaxing in a country Inn
with plenty on my mind
sipping on gin with a great
big grin, I was destine
to make him mine.
An hour or two was sure to
prove true that he was up to
something, but he sat there
waiting while anticipating
hoping that I was too.
From across the room our
hearts were in tune guessing
what each one was thinking,
but if he only knew or had a
clue that I am going to
seduce him.
Our eyes were locked and he
was shocked to see what I had
for him, my lips were wet and
breasts erect oblivious to
anyone knowing.
I clinched my teeth around my
drink, finishing with
one last swallow, It didn't
take him long to see that I
was ready to follow.
We ended this night each with
delight,never to speak again
and I''ll always regret..but
never forget,that on this
night I committed a sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 5:14 AM
Bravo, go out and live girl - awesome Donna>>James
Dvorkis Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 6:10 PM
I don't understand why you consider this action sinful. If he was married maybe, otherwise this seems pretty normal in human to human interaction. I like the bodily imagery you use. It carries the seduction through your words.
Parish Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 5:47 PM
This is an eye opener. Very good write I must say. descriptive also.
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