The Ultimate

Her wholeness offered Her body, her life, her soul He treasures her gift

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2012 4:48:00 PM

Rollo, wow...is this for the sexy haiku contest... good luck, with your awesome haiku... pd

Rollo West
Date: 11/9/2012 5:06:00 PM

Hi PD, it is now if I can enter more than one. Thank you so much for your comments Rollo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2012 3:55:00 PM

Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Rollo West
Date: 11/9/2012 4:00:00 PM

hi Sara, thank you so much Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 3:35:00 PM

Romance in the air .... well written Rollo. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 11/9/2012 4:01:00 PM

Hi Anne and thank you for taking the time to read my poems. Rollo