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The Ugly Duckling

... Its voice, a rhyme,a charm, echo o f time forever gone , piercing into bulky stillness of night, crowned by the solitude of silence, silhouettes and shadows ,dancing under an umbel of darkness, ever so present. slowly it swims, on a crystal lake, gentle breeze ruffles its silky silver feathers, ---- a soothing touch of relief, a refreshing smile--------------- The mirror couldn’t hide, its bleeding grief, an ending saga of ridicule, but it reflected a courage to survive, that even grey shades couldn’t conquer. It was not just a reflection ,but an image of its reality, veiled under a soul hurt but pure.Will she swim out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 2:16:00 AM
Very nice poem in a shape form. I salute you for this one. Wish you more success. Ernilando
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:10:00 PM
wow, what a great shape you formed. I really like it. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:55:00 AM
Very clever! Susan
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:48:00 AM
This is beautiful, and VERY well done!
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