The Ugly Duckling

... 
                  Its
                voice, 
            a rhyme,a 
               charm,  
               echo  
               o  f 
              time 
             forever    
            gone ,         piercing into 
            bulky    stillness of night, crowned  
            by the  solitude of silence, silhouettes 
            and  shadows ,dancing under an umbel of  
             darkness,  ever so present. slowly it 
             swims, on a crystal lake, gentle breeze 
              ruffles its silky silver feathers, 
---- a soothing touch of relief, a refreshing smile---------------
             The mirror couldn’t hide, its bleeding 
             grief, an ending  saga of  ridicule, but
            it  reflected   a  courage  to  survive, 
            that even grey shades couldn’t conquer. 
            It was  not just a reflection ,but an
            image          of its reality, 
            veiled
              under
               a soul 
                 hurt
                  but 
             pure.Will 
                she swim 
                  out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tugaff Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 2:16 AM
Very nice poem in a shape form. I salute you for this one. Wish you more success. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 12:10 PM
wow, what a great shape you formed. I really like it. LUv, andrea
Palli Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Very clever! Susan
Mitchell Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 5:48 AM
This is beautiful, and VERY well done!
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