The Ugliness of Reincarnation

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And if there’s nothing left to come back to ... 
shall we wander the aimless wasteland 
as ghosts 
along with the other extinctic creatures. 
A barren planet of our making: 
literally, Hell on Earth. 
So, let us pray the Lord’s prayer 
for a little intervention. 
A little “on Earth as it is in Heaven.” 
would be nice. 
It’s been a while.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2025 8:29:00 PM

Dear Benjamin, I enjoyed your set of reincarnation poems. I’m so glad I came over to read this companion piece to The Beauty of Reincarnation. The light hearted touch softens the profound message so it’s easier to take (like a spoonful of sugar) but it doesn’t dampen its potency. Simply stunning in its meaningful message delivered so poetically. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tom Woody

Date: 7/31/2025 9:11:00 AM

There's good news! Prophecies indicate divine intervention is imminent. Earth will never be destroyed - Psalm 37:10,11,29. Poignant message Ben

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 7/31/2025 3:05:00 PM

Praise the Lord! I'm a little out of touch with Biblical prophecy. Thanks for the reminder.