The Two of Us

If it was just the two of us,
I'd whisper in your ear,
Ill take you by the hand and we'd fly, away from life, away from death
you'd hold me close and together we'd jump, fall into the sky, fall into the galaxy

But it's not the two of us,
theres that girl you're always talking with, the mother with disapproving eyes, the friends 
with frowns on their faces
So if it ever were just the two of us...
please don't let go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 23, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Rina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 1:08 PM
RINA, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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