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The Two of Us

If it was just the two of us, I'd whisper in your ear, Ill take you by the hand and we'd fly, away from life, away from death you'd hold me close and together we'd jump, fall into the sky, fall into the galaxy But it's not the two of us, theres that girl you're always talking with, the mother with disapproving eyes, the friends with frowns on their faces So if it ever were just the two of us... please don't let go.

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Date: 10/22/2024 6:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:13:00 PM
Rina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:08:00 PM
RINA, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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