The Two Broken Boats

Seaguls are flying
Javed and Nora are no 
more
To see the surging tides
The two broken boats 
are now
Buried deep in the dry 
sand.
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August 6, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Very deep, D B. Jirel. hope both boats find repairs... xox~ SKAT
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