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The Twelfth of Never

I once secured a mortgage loan, never noticing the date on the statement.* I was concerned about securing a down payment and an affordable payment. The interest rate was one to die for, it seemed; and the house was both a steal and a dream. The steal allowed the house to be affordable, and the dream made it incredibly adorable. . The four words were right before me as plain as day. It read, "Last payment due on "The Twelfth Of Never". It was as if I was signing so much of my life away. When I finally took the time to analyze things, my tight-fitting head became filled with steam; To-die-for interest rates became a never-dying nightmare of a never ending story, and putting the cart before the horse in pursuit of a house has brought me far too much worry. So I bid you beware of deals that look like a steal. Be wise to read the details before you close the deal. And beware of that God-forbidding 'Twelfth of Never', because it can pain your life for what seems forever. 112420PSCtest, Pick-A-Title, Vol 25 - Rhyme 2, Edward Ibeh Title chosen: The Twelfth Of Never.5P *Fiction

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Date: 12/2/2020 2:24:00 PM
for those who have not planned things out, mortgages can become a nightmare. Great parody of this situation. Congrats on the win, Curtis.
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Date: 12/2/2020 11:59:00 AM
Wonderful write, wonderful message! I loved this, Curtis:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/1/2020 6:28:00 AM
It's a very long time to forever. :) Congratulations on the win Curtis! Linda
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