The Twelfth of Never

I once secured a mortgage loan, never noticing the date on the statement.*                                                                                               I was concerned about securing a down payment and an affordable payment.

The interest rate was one to die for, it seemed;                                                                                                    and the house was both a steal and a dream.                                  
The steal allowed the house to be affordable,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   and the dream made it incredibly adorable.                                                                                        .
The four words were right before me as plain as day.
It read, "Last payment due on "The Twelfth Of Never".                                                                                                   It was as if I was signing so much of my life away.
When I finally took the time to analyze things,                                                                                                                      my tight-fitting head became filled with steam;

To-die-for interest rates became a never-dying nightmare                             of a never ending story, and putting the cart before the horse                       
in pursuit of a house has brought me far too much worry.

So I bid you beware of deals that look like a steal.                                                                                                       Be wise to read the details before you close the deal.
And beware of that God-forbidding 'Twelfth of Never',                                                                                    because it can pain your life for what seems forever.

112420PSCtest, Pick-A-Title, Vol 25 - Rhyme 2, Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: The Twelfth Of Never.5P                                                                                         *Fiction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:24 PM
for those who have not planned things out, mortgages can become a nightmare. Great parody of this situation. Congrats on the win, Curtis.
Ibeh Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:59 AM
Wonderful write, wonderful message! I loved this, Curtis:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Fowler Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 6:28 AM
It's a very long time to forever. :) Congratulations on the win Curtis! Linda
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