The Twelfth of Never

The twelfth of never,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         how very clever.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      That is a very long time,                                                                                                                                                                                                                           to listen to a wind chime.                                                                                                                                                                                               


  
Date Written: 11/13/2020                                                                                                                           The Twelfth of Never                                                                                                                                                                        Pick-A-Title, Vol 25 - Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest                                                                                                                                                     Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Buhagiar Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Quite a funny take on this contest. Best for a win. ~~
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. Guess I was in a funny mood that day. Have a great weekend.....................
Adams Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:17 AM
love this one...short but paints the picture wonderfully... my son's neighbor has several wind chimes, when i go over to walk his dogs i love standing there and listening to them... hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this write. I have missed hearing from you. Hope you are OK. I love wind chimes and the different sounds they make. Have a great weekend with hugs...................
Proxenos Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:45 AM
A fun, witty clever short write - bet you had fun with it, but very astute of you to think like this. Well penned Paula. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like it. it was a fun write. Enjoy your weekend with hugs and blessings...............
Bayles Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Good poem, Paula. I liked the first line, especially.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, for reading and writing. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your weekend............
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Ha, ha! I haven't viewed the picture for the contest, Paula, but this sure is charming the 'bejeebers' out of me! Peace, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Thanks, writing. Glad you like this one. it was a fun write. Enjoy your day..............
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 4:36 PM
love this one so short and smart. So were we to do only one stanza? I need to soupmail the judge on that.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like it. I hope I did this right. Have a wonderful day...............
Horsman Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Clever poetry Paula, love it.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thanks, for reading and writing. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day............
Rose  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:54 PM
Ah Paula, I can listen to a wind chime for ever on forever, I love the sound of them, very witty entry. Good luck in the contest,
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. I love wind chimes. I have a few of them. Enjoy your day............
Brul Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Lovely rendition dear Paula..Goodluck.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Thanks, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Enjoy your day.........................
Krutsinger Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:17 PM
I can hear it too now. Good luck in the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. Enjoy your day.........................
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