The Tsar- For Whom the Bell Tolls

The Tsar

Bronze Titan, the Leviathan
our Empress Anna's child
borne incandescent from the pit
Tsar Kolokol I'm styled.
Stand inside me, hear your voice
for thou shalt not hear mine
intended once for time of war
not praise to the Divine.
Such arrogance a curse since led
to each of us, the three
by God's command to never hang
and mark the centuries.
Both forged in fire, destroyed by fire
their fate my brothers two
their skins and souls redeemed once more
to fashion me, anew.
Unknown, too, their ignominy
was forged into this shell
and I too returned to the pit
the third dark Angel fell.
Colossi for four hundred years
exalted now I stand
for everybody knows of me
although I never rang.

For Contest 'For whom the bell tolls', sponsor Debbie Guzzi
July 28th 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Duncan Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Wow so vivid. Love it,,, nice win :)
Deschler Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 1:19 PM
I enjoyed your unique and interesting take on the bells theme... This is a moving and powerful write. Very well penned, Viv! Congrats on the win!
Wigley Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Thanks, Kelly, very kind. Nice to throw a history lesson into the mix. One hell of a bell. Viv x
Callus Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Your 'educational piece' is written in beautiful poetic language, Viv...and that's why it's a winner!! Congratulations! // paul
Wigley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks, Paul, everybody gets to learn something new, which is nice. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Viv, had to look this one up. Interesting story. Oh, about your poem, beautiful exalting words. Love the smooth rhyme scheme and the perspective (Wish I could talk like a bell).
Wigley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thanks James, and for taking the tmie to research this colossus. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 6:53 AM
you sure thought out of the box for this one Mr Viv - my congrats:-0 hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Ta muchly, me duck x
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Brilliant take on bells Viv ! Congrats on big win!
Wigley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Thanks, Dr Upma, you too x
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Viv, Congratulations, on your win in Debbie's contest. Love SKAT
Wigley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Thanks, Skat, surprised I placed- looking at the standard of competition, I feel my educational piece is like a hobo that wandered off the street into the Waldorf Astoria Hotel..... Viv x
Eastman Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:24 AM
A very intricately woven poem. Your a master of words here.
Wigley Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Thanks, Carol, a grandiose style for a very grand bell. Viv x
Nunez Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Impressive. 'Tis a better way to learn history, no? Keep them coming! hugs!
Wigley Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:06 PM
My God, I have to love a girl that uses 'tis. Thanks for your appreciation of my history lesson, Kim. I would have loved to hear the Tsar ring out, but it is not to be. Viv x
Laurie Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:15 PM
G'day Viv... not only a great poem to read, but a fine history lesson for me - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Lindsay, when you look at the photos of it it's one hell of a bell, would love to go visit it. Sad to think we'll never hear it. I love the sound of a big 'un. Big ben being a classic case in point. Regards, Viv
Beaufort Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:04 PM
You have a very unusual way of looking at things, Viv. It's called thinking outside the box. That is a talent reserved for the few. How you gained this perspective and wisdom must be quite a series of stories. Your words are are very welcome in my thoughts and feelings.
Wigley Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Thanks, Duke, I probably got it from you. Regards, Viv
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