The Truth Will Unravel

An unarmed soldier seeks justice 
where the wolves prowl awaiting their prey 
armed with faith silver shining chalice glowing light

Striking blows the deceiving fool flash reveals
Behind one mask lies a corrupt soul
I see the real picture frowns 

But in front of the true judge Almighty
Our Creator 
he will then face his accused head on 

Only then dawning of his final chapter
destiny in a blink of an eye showdown begins 
when a strike of someones tongue hurts 

A bully of violence casting poison each false word
condemns the innocence hope always remains 
when you see the truth clearly a chariot of fire 

Stands out a million miles away
sometimes people are quick to judge the fact hides 
in the unknown answer remains even in dust of our being 

unrhymed tercet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/9/2015 4:13:00 PM
powerful read, liam..a winner for me... keep the pen going!... huggs
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:54:00 AM
- Justice ..... we know what is wrong and we know what is right, and we must fight for truth !!! - A powerful write, dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:33:00 AM
Very powerful write, be curious the background, but the message here is clear to me, what goes around comes around! Loved the poem, could be the intro to a movie!
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Date: 9/7/2015 5:03:00 PM
Hi Liam!A very sad poem, you've penned here this time my dearest friend.So very sad in content indeed but very beautifully written just the same.A true golden gem!Just dazzling.Your pen is truly mighty golden.A 7 + + +! A fav.I do hope and pray with all my heart and soul that you're really okay in everything right now Liam.One thing I know for sure is that our Lord God and Savior is always with you my dearest friend Liam.And yes, hope always remains and the truth always sees the light.I am always keeping you in my prayers everyday.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very peaceful and lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/7/2015 4:08:00 PM
He will be the ultimate judge. Nice to see you Liam...cheers Tim
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2015 4:25:00 PM
thank you tim your so kind for the wonderful comment pal yeah not neen on line as much these days i have a lot on my plate passing you a warm smile wishing you a blessing of a week
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