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The Truth Speaks Louder

Than all those whom promote killing 
as progress science has said life begins in the womb 
shade it which ever way you truly wish 
shows an aggressive side which is very heartless 
to say the least because i know 
how deeply you have insulted me 
in every way from having an opinion or sense 
plain as ice to be seen on my stand in the protection of life 
are you trying overturn my good values 
shame on you with such ugly agendas towards others 
also very aggressive i find cursing my existence 
abort like my view trying to overpower my comment on an article 
so sad really focus your energy on your children 
not killing other peoples I lost a child 
you even try to dehumanise my thought process 
that is sick in my book of life long live our children's rights

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/25/2018 8:48:00 AM

My compliments for the vigor you express in your poems. You made your case passionately as an advocate for children. The same is true about other social issues dear to your cause. Keep writing liam!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/25/2018 12:16:00 AM

I’m also very sorry for your loss, Liam.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/25/2018 12:15:00 AM

Yes, we who believe in the sanctity of life need to continue to speak out for the unborn children that deserve life! Men try to “play God” and abort babies, but God will someday have the last word with them...great, emotive write!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/24/2018 4:20:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt!It breaks my heart to know all the sad, bad things you go thru .Remember the Lord is with you always no matter what.Abortion is very horrible crime against the sweet,innocent unborn babies, n' all,Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' need to pray more for everyone n' all, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take good care of yourself !To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^