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The Truth Hurts

The blade of a knife no sharper weapon he thought 'Til his son's forked tongue anguish brought

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Date: 10/28/2023 4:20:00 PM
Short and to the point! :-) The tongue is often sharper than the sword, my friend. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/28/2023 7:34:00 PM
Yup, and I never saw a tongue with a 'rubber tip.'
Date: 10/26/2023 4:22:00 PM
Ahh, the lessons of life keep coming, I guess, no matter the age. Nice and succinct poem that gives pause.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2023 8:01:00 PM
I give pause. The Chicago Bears have no paws. That's their problem!
Date: 10/25/2023 2:56:00 PM
Nuff said, GW. Succinct, to the point and bang on accurate!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2023 7:57:00 PM
Bang on, bang on Harvest moon... Gosh can't think of the rest, suddenly...
Date: 10/25/2023 2:33:00 PM
ah, sometimes the tongue can misbehave...say things it shouldn't otta. :-) Some wisdom in your cleverness...a forked tongue and hurtful words do bring anguish. Nicely done, Gershon! Sara
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Date: 10/25/2023 1:27:00 PM
Our mother always told us "the truth only hurts when it's supposed to."
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2023 7:57:00 PM
Change when to where, and now you have my mother.
Date: 10/25/2023 1:16:00 PM
a wise observation, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2023 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, ilene. My head is spinning, doing a veritable '359.95' (just the discounter in me, I guess) over this one. ~ Wise Old Owl, aka Manny the Merchandiser
Date: 10/25/2023 10:13:00 AM
Often the tongue hurts others, like a knife!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2023 8:23:00 PM
I was thinking that these crazies that shoot people don’t need their gun taken away…just their arms. Never would happen, but people shouldn’t have to lose their lives!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2023 7:08:00 PM
Or at least, like a fork. ~ Tonto (aka Jay Silverheels who used to say, 'White man speak with forked tongue!).

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