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The Truth About Lies

The truth about lies as we all know Is they take us to a place so low That place you hoped you'd never go Where what we become, we dare not show Where words are enemies unknown They kill with no intention shown Lies, bruise deeper than any stone Always, at our hearts directly thrown Trust becomes something that we fear When too close to believing we get near Lies like music, flow from mouth to ear But much easier to tell, than to hear Lies take our needing others away You find yourself questioning everything they say Afraid if you go down again, you'll stay The truth about lies, they cause life's decay ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/7/2013 4:02:00 PM
Such a clever title. And the line much easier to tell than to hear. Very inciteful. I'm glad you commented on my poem. It's nice to discover someone new.
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/7/2013 4:44:00 PM
Well glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by all my poems. I shall check out yours as well
Date: 2/3/2013 6:53:00 PM
Wow, truth be told! Catchy poem. Reads like a poem I'd rehearse and recite <3
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:18:00 PM
Kindest words I've received so far among the many many kind words. Thank you so much. I guessain as well as joy make us the people we are.we get to choose how to use the experience. I believe I grow stronger most days.......most.....blessings
Date: 2/3/2013 4:37:00 PM
Great work about a topic that is very painful in relationships or in life generally..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:10:00 PM
You really blew me away with that beauty. So talented. After a couple weeks here on soup I feel kindness from everyone. Thank you for reading my poem
Date: 2/3/2013 2:30:00 PM
your peom srtuck a chord with me this afternoon. The truth about lies and truths often become confused. Good poetic interpretation.
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 2:52:00 PM
Thank you so much. Have a blessed week. I look forward to visiting with you many more times I hope.
Date: 2/3/2013 11:54:00 AM
This is a very truthful and ingenious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding poem this afternoon! You have portrayed this write so perfectly, a rhyming guru you are Donna! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 2:55:00 PM
Well well...guru...now I guess I've been called just about every four letter word. Haha.. kidding... you are so kind always...thanks again

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