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The Truth

the truth will rise like a hungry tide fraud and pride will have nowhere to hide 2nd Place When one line is not enough Contest Judged: 6/4/2018 6:10:00 AM Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 6/9/2018 9:57:00 PM
Good one, Natasha. Congrats on your top win.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/9/2018 11:36:00 PM
Thanks Line :)
Date: 6/7/2018 8:37:00 AM
Yours is a lovely and meaningful couplet, Natasha! It is said that truth is powerful and it will prevail! In my country we have a saying about truth that goes: "Oil rises above water". Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2018 12:32:00 PM
The name is not new to me:) Pleased to meet a fellow lyric writer:) Regards // paul
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/7/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Paul and I'm Maltese :) :)
Date: 6/4/2018 11:09:00 PM
Great inspirational verse, Natasha, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/5/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thanks dear :)
Date: 6/4/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wise two liner. So true. Time will always tell.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/5/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thanks. Hugs :)
Date: 6/4/2018 8:58:00 AM
Congrats, Natasha! Love this!
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Kim :)
Date: 6/4/2018 8:24:00 AM
Back to say congrats, Natasha, I am coming to expect seeing your name in the winners circle. Nicely done. John
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks John :) :)
Date: 6/4/2018 8:14:00 AM
- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Natasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Anne :)
Date: 6/4/2018 7:01:00 AM
A two line masterpiece, Natasha. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Elaine :)
Date: 6/4/2018 6:15:00 AM
Yes, truth always comes out in the end.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:46:00 AM
I loved the challenge and so happy you liked it. Thanks :)
Date: 6/2/2018 12:31:00 PM
Nicely written, Natasha, you are the ever optimistic rebel. I keep telling myself that that truth will prevail and yet fraud and pride are still prevalent all around me. I will keep the faith. John
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:13:00 AM
People can’t handle the truth unless it is to their benefit.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/4/2018 10:46:00 AM
Unfortunately very true
Date: 6/2/2018 3:36:00 AM
A nice little rhyme indeed...All the best Natasha
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Natasha Turner
Date: 6/2/2018 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Arturo :)

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