The True Cause of My Cancer

Could be anything
But I know it was your Hate
YEARS, stuffed down my throat
Accumulating as this:
Esophageal Cancer


6/13/12
For the "Cantankacerous" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Interesting thoughts about the cancer and I think that emotions can truly effect our bodies..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the visits..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 8:17 PM
More poems from you, sweetie!!!
Wesley Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Hate is a cancer isn't it Susan; an amazing truth you've penned here!
Song Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Strongest correlation to cancer of any of the entries...very strong statement that needs to be heard...Hey, I didn't know you were a perennial til I went to the garden center today...You are hardy and here a long long time! llololol. Beautiful flower, gal! gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:59 PM
Susan, I know I saw this GREAT poem of yours before and yet I see no comment from me here. Maybe I saw it at PFT. Anyway, I see congratulations are in order.WAY to GO, my friend!!
Song Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 3:12 PM
An award-winning APPLAUSE for this great tanka... Congrats Susan...You really shined! Luv, Gwendolen
D. Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 10:22 AM
grats on win took me a moment to figure this out (possibly with help from the comments below) see i knew you had potential and this is truelly a poem and work of art
Palmer Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 6:30 PM
cancerous love,great write B-E-S
Guzzi Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Yike! But I do know what you mean the throat area is related to the 3rd chakra and has to do with finding and using your own voice [one meaning is speaking up & out for onself..singing is a healing way to use this chakra!] It took me 30 years to find my voice and I am still working on it. From your verse I can tell you are working hard on your voice too. BIG HUGS! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
Horne Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Heartfelt and heartbreaking piece, Susan - I'm sorry you had such a hateful person in your life. Thanks very much - loved your contest and congrats on your wins : )
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Another overwhelming 1st place winner Susan. Love, Carol
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!! GREAT JOB!!!
Arowolo Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 4:50 PM
Beautiful piece,Susan...Great job..Congratulations on your superb win...
Britt Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 2:37 PM
It really DOES go down like this CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Susan <3
Richards Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 2:34 PM
It is true, how such a thing could cause harm in so many ways....mental/physical diseases go hand in hand....Well done!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Susan, another WOW write from you! Congrats on your win!! Love, Rhonda
Song Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Stored up rage can def have negative effects on cells...chronic stress can wreak all sorts of havok...I love this idea for Joann's contest and I love each and every poem like yours that makes us stop and think a moment about our actions. You wrote a great one, Susan. * I always like to take the time to thank a sponsor for taking precious time to throw a contest...those who don't sponsor them do not fully understand the responsibility...Thank u for appreciating my military twist on eggs...although my topic is controversial. Love, Gwendolen
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 5:51 AM
A very powerful Tanka!! Love it!!
Kearley Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Susan,Wow! I have been reading your works,and geez! They really get to me! I find it hard to comment on some of them?Because they just get me...Very nice works :o) And thank you always for your comments... :o)
A   Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Hi Susan, this is out raged... and i have a cancer poem, that explains how cancer is a disease that says it all.... and stuffed down my babes spine is where it will always live.... he he he... he will never know what I'm talking about...xox~pd
Puddifoot Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 3:23 PM
yes, there is a theory that suppressed emotion can lead to cancer...edgy and packs a punch, an original take on the theme...
Sivey Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:37 AM
What a powerful write my friend! I believe that cancer can develop within bad vibes! You've written a fantastic poem Susan! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 8:49 AM
SAD!!!!*********** Luck in contest B.E.S.! Cancer eat you up, hate it. - oxox Anne-Lise
Northeast Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 7:08 AM
This is so sad susan- but very powerful, Brenda : )
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