The Troll's Treasures

Broken hearts Under the bridge. Stacked and sorted. Sorted and stacked Cracked and crushed Crushed and cracked. Broken hearts Under the bridge.

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Skat A

Date: 9/7/2013 8:52:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS VICTORIA, on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. Love ~SKAT~

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 9/11/2013 2:49:00 PM

thanks...I always love to hear from readers...hope you read more of my work! V

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2013 5:09:00 PM

Victoria, , Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda...

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 9/11/2013 2:53:00 PM

thanks for the comment..sorry to be such a bad participant lately, but have been out bear watching and offline for the summer...Alaska is too beautiful to resist sometimes! V

Gopak U.R

Date: 9/4/2013 11:02:00 AM

broken hearts under the bridge... or in the river? liked your poem....

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 9/11/2013 2:52:00 PM

nice comment....I think there are enough broken hearts to be both under the bridge and in the river! Maybe in the river is still in the weeping stage, eh? thanks for reading, but especially, thanks for taking the time to comment! V