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Demetrios Trifiatis

The Triumph

You, the conqueror 

your heart's subject I became 
 
Triumph is all mine! 
 



(C) Demetrios Trifiatis
       02 August 2015

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2015

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August 2, 2015 at 9:02 PM

This reminds me of a saying "A man woos a woman until she catches him." Made me smile there, sire. YOU are in a romantic mood which is good because everyone enjoys it. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 3, 2015 at 5:14 AM

The spirit it was written is this: When I am with you I always feel victorious! Thank you dear, Kim for "your saying" I will keep that in mind for it is good. Thank you also for your lovely comment!

Eileen Manassian

August 2, 2015 at 1:41 PM

To conquer and be conquered....Oh....heavenly write!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 3, 2015 at 5:15 AM

Oh, yes, either way, we are winners for we are with the person we wish to be! Thank you dear, Eileen for your visit and superb comment! Filakia.

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2015 at 10:55 AM

love it. it's so TRIUMPHANT!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 3, 2015 at 5:16 AM

Such a triumphant comment dear, Andrea! Thank you so much for your precious visit!

Richard Lamoureux

August 2, 2015 at 8:58 AM

I like the twist at the end.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 3, 2015 at 5:19 AM

Thank you my friend, Richard for your appreciation!

August 2, 2015 at 7:40 AM

simply lovely Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 2, 2015 at 8:33 AM

Thank you, Jan. You so kind!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 2, 2015 at 7:17 AM

- Beautiful, my friend Demetrios - (Triumph for both hearts) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 2, 2015 at 8:34 AM

Yes, Anne-Lise, in a relationship of true love the triumph is for both. thank you!

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