The Trip. Finished

All the screaming, yelling, fighting, pushing, and shoving 
has got us all complaining, what a beautiful trip. 

Someone get me out of this van! I'm so tierd of all of you.

Yeah dad you said make it a good trip. 
Mom you said not to argue.

But what did we do?

Oh yes.... 

All the screaming, yelling, pushing, shoveing
has got us all complaining, what a beautiful trip.

What a beautiful trip we had.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 1, 2012 at 11:22 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Emily. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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June 2, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Good poem. Something about that title just insists on flipping the script. Thanks.
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May 24, 2009 at 8:20 PM
hahaha was it really that bad
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