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The Trinity

God the maker of love
For he will never boast
And he lives up above
But with him also lives a ghost
Who is a most unwelcomed host


For Dr. Ram Mehta's contest

lovequintain (english)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2011 at 5:15 AM

Congratulations Brittany on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

April 16, 2011 at 6:01 PM

Great to see you in the top ten Brittany. Congratulations on your worthy poem's tenth place. Agape, Moses

Mitch White

April 16, 2011 at 8:07 AM

I really, really liked this. Smiles and congrats to you

Gautami Phookan

April 16, 2011 at 4:23 AM

Many Congrats Brittany on your big win with this excellent entry..Love, Gautami

Dr Hitendra Mehta

April 16, 2011 at 4:02 AM

Many congrats Brittany for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

April 15, 2011 at 6:26 PM

Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Brittany, Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2011 at 6:15 PM

Congratulations, Brittany.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 15, 2011 at 4:25 PM

Congrats Brittany on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing creative entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv and happy weekend too..