The Tricksters

Like attracts like, or so they say
solitary, the sentinel stood
brown and brittle, lifeless
Its cracked surface home to many
small unfriendly, burrowing, things
corpse companions...

A raven roosts
in its pitch less, upturned arms
undeterred by the sharpness of needles
long lost to the memory
of evergreen winter,
untouched by Persephone’s bloom.

Death holds sway here.
The once noble pine
killed by the acid reign of man,
now serves only the tricksters,
as he flies between worlds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bailey Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Nice write!
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 6:50 PM
some great imagery and word play in here, Debs, A very profound one for today's world!
Mac Donald Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 5:03 PM
It's so sad to see those dead and dying trees. The woodpeckers like em well enough though. My sister had one of these tall once magestic pines...the bark was caked with sap, like it had been crying. A powerful write with amazing metaphors and imagery. Best wishes, Debbie!! Mikki
Onclaud Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:12 AM
the use of words really give a nice accent to this " tree" piece, debs... and the flow of polarity is defining with creepy, colorful fantasy. wonderful stuff!... :) huggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Oooh, this poem is really gripping, Deb. I can see the "cracked surface home" so well as you describe this tree. And then the death of the pine by the acid "reign" of man. Very clever play on words. The Tricksters goes to my favorites, Deb! Awesome statement on environmental neglect. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 8:28 AM
A definite '10' in a rating scale of only '7' Deb .. awesome first line as one of the blogs just mentioned about the impact of that first line of a poem to begin the reading journey.. powerful and intense my friend.. luv.. from Italy..
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