The Trick of Deception

You think you know who I am
You believe to know my whole story
How dead wrong you are about it
You are being misleaded by my actions

I am a troubled spririt
And you thought I was fine
Ha, how I've fooled you all
Because you believe everything you see

Though I am not brusied on the outside
My soul is crushed and burning with hurt
I haven't been whole for many years now
Torn into many pieces that are unable to be fixed

So don't look at my smile and think I'm fine
Look into my eyes, they will tell my story
As I lay here defeated by my own wickedness
Destroyed by the wounds that dwell inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/11/2009 6:52:00 PM
this is exactley how i feel! this is really good!
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Date: 6/10/2009 12:57:00 AM
i know how u feel very nice write
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:14:00 PM
so sad but i understand the pain will always be there but in time it will subside have faith thanks for the comment
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Date: 6/9/2009 2:05:00 AM
hiya! dear would you be interested in buying and reading a poetry collection written by me.If yes please do go to www.abook2read.com page and click on the collection link.I assure you it would be worth your while. Shishir Gupta
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:28:00 PM
So sad... I really love it and totally felt the last stanza in my gut. Awesome right! Peace Levi
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful story also.... really enjoyed it alot. Enjoy your day.
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