Richard Palmer Poet Tail-rhyme

The Tree of Life

The tree of life,I climb today,
                  So hard 
                  to climb, 
            Try different ways
                 Life breeze
                  is blowing, 
            It swings,  it sways
                  I hold on 
                     tight,
                I climb,I pray,
                 I wont fall.
                   I have
                      to
                    stay,
          
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                  for that,
               Victorious day.....

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Patricia L Graham April 2, 2014 at 7:40 AM Very clever and with victorious roots too!!! Richard Palmer April 5, 2014 at 12:22 PM yep,victory from the roots,,,thanks Patricia

Amy Green February 26, 2014 at 10:32 PM The meaning of the structure- all of it. Brilliant. Richard Palmer April 5, 2014 at 12:21 PM thanks again Amy,,,yeah I gave it a lot of thought,,,

Amy Green February 26, 2014 at 10:31 PM I really enjoyed this. Not just words, but structure. Standing ovation! Richard Palmer April 5, 2014 at 12:19 PM thank you Amy,,,taking it with a bow lol

Mehnaz Veetil January 1, 2013 at 10:23 PM Tree of life- a historic allusion too. Great creativity here. Loved it. True, feel like climbing this tree. Wish you luck. , Mehnaz. Richard Palmer January 2, 2013 at 5:16 AM thank you very much,climb Mehnaz,climb high for 2013

Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2012 at 4:57 PM This is very cool, try climbing from the bottom up. it has an intresting feel "Victorious day for that climbing, stay to I have, I wont fall, I climb, I pray, tight I hold on, it swings it sways, is blowing life breeze, try different ways to climb. So hard the tree of life I climb today," Richard Palmer November 24, 2012 at 10:47 AM lol,crossed my eyes lol,thanks Richard

Germaine Thompson October 13, 2012 at 8:27 AM yow Richard dis shat dawg an how yuh form it out like a real tree sick!!!! yow mi a invite yuh a mi poetry event fi come perform this when yuh ready bredda just link mi if yh interested zeen!!! Richard Palmer October 13, 2012 at 3:57 PM yuh see it mi doops,jus trying a bit of creativity,happy yuh luv di vibes,bless up Germaine

Len Gasun September 7, 2012 at 8:41 AM I feel like climbing while reading your awesome poem, Richard. I've almost missed this poem of yours. *I love it and your form is very creative, More power to you always. Thank you for stopping by today leaving an appreciative comment to my poem dedicated to our very dear friend, PD, Have a nice day filled with graces always! :) hugs, leonora Richard Palmer September 7, 2012 at 8:57 AM thank you very much,same to you oxoxox

Lide Sangtam August 16, 2012 at 12:12 PM Narrow is the way to truth and life and if we have faith that surpasses all human knowledge and understanding, we will get to the place of serenity which was lose. I love your poems. love your creativity! take care. Richard Palmer August 16, 2012 at 2:32 PM thank you very much Lide,your comment was heart warming

Keisha Davis August 15, 2012 at 12:36 PM this is beautiful..love the creativity as well Richard Palmer August 16, 2012 at 2:30 PM thanks much Keisha

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown July 22, 2012 at 5:39 AM wonderful man! great work, am enjoying myself. go for contest. I will post a work on tree of life for in one of my poetry book. Richard Palmer August 16, 2012 at 2:29 PM thanks Alfred

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2012 at 4:40 PM This is just wonderful. DId you put it in to the shape contest? I think it could work there!! Richard Palmer July 21, 2012 at 11:00 PM THANK YOU,NO,GONNA GIVE IT A TRY ANDREA

Sukmawati Komala July 17, 2012 at 10:53 PM this is awesome, you delivered smiles,peace comfort and joy while i climb with you. Thank you so much Richard :) SK Richard Palmer July 18, 2012 at 6:04 AM holding your hand,won't let you fall,thanks SK

Joy Wellington July 15, 2012 at 8:10 AM SUCH A BEAUTY MY FRIEND!!!! LOVING IT TO THE MAX!!! Blessings. Joy Wells Richard Palmer July 16, 2012 at 9:38 AM thanks Joy,loving it too my pretty friend

Cheryl Glans July 10, 2012 at 5:08 PM wow nice write really enjoyed it thanks for sharing Richard Palmer July 11, 2012 at 8:54 AM thanks Cheryl

Kerry Singleton July 7, 2012 at 6:31 PM love the way it looks like a tree very creative, great write :) Richard Palmer July 8, 2012 at 10:39 AM thank you very much

Aida Melesse July 6, 2012 at 10:51 PM Keep on climbing..loved your write! Much love. Richard Palmer July 7, 2012 at 1:27 PM thanks much Aida

Sherese Gooden July 6, 2012 at 8:38 AM Enjoyed that. Richard Palmer July 6, 2012 at 9:22 AM thank you Sherese

Marty Owens July 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM Very inspirational...enjoyed...Marty Richard Palmer July 6, 2012 at 9:21 AM thanks Marty

Fisayo Aderounmu July 6, 2012 at 5:45 AM This is a great piece creatively penned. Thanks Richard for your visit and comments on my poems. Shallom. Richard Palmer July 6, 2012 at 7:29 AM bless Fisayo,thanks

Elizabeth Wesley July 4, 2012 at 8:13 AM Great faith in what we read and hope for will help find the goal. Wonderful way to express your faith! :) Richard Palmer July 5, 2012 at 8:42 AM thank you Elizabeth

The Situation June 30, 2012 at 6:26 PM a day we hope is not far away. Richard Palmer June 30, 2012 at 7:04 PM thanks Situation

Tammy Flanagan June 30, 2012 at 4:58 PM Your poetry gives hope which is what we all need! Very well written! Richard Palmer June 30, 2012 at 7:02 PM thanks Tammy,I try

Andre Sanders June 30, 2012 at 12:46 PM Only the strong survive... hold on and never look down Victorious days are right around the corner. keep climbing my friend Richard Palmer June 30, 2012 at 3:37 PM ok I will survive then,the strong,thanks Andre

James Marshall Goff June 29, 2012 at 11:41 PM Greetings Richard! Thanks for visiting my work! I like the feeling of hope this fine poem inspires! Jimbo Richard Palmer June 30, 2012 at 6:08 AM thanks James

Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2012 at 5:10 PM Nicely done.....hold on tight Richard - well written poem. - Have a lovely weekend. - big hug to my little baby sweetheart. - oxox Anne-Lise Richard Palmer June 29, 2012 at 11:10 PM thanks Anne Lise,baby sends his oxox

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