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The Tree In My Heart

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I've ne'er beheld such a magnificent tree. Only you were a ration of my life spree. Your shadow splatters my scorching flesh. Striving to restrain agony out of my thresh. A tree that can bear both heat and downpour. Hence, you ditched my futile and deceitful spore. You typically offer me advice right away. When I'm lost, you indicate for me the way. Your plush pale coat screens me from worry. Infers that it is plausible to opine fearlessly. A capable tree of seeing remorse. Beings pull vitality in the water source. I gathered this fruit from your anile stem. My key insight became crucial mayhem. Only a subtle tree receives my praise. As yet, I was sustained by a reckless craze. I've not imagined a fully-fledged tree before. Crafted with zeal and artistry at its exposed core.
Written: October 18, 2021

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Date: 10/19/2021 1:00:00 AM
What a tribute to a magnificent tree. Wonderful.
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Date: 10/18/2021 8:30:00 PM
Trees are like works of art to me-beautiful, and no two alike. I've never seen one as beautiful as your picture, though. Your poem is wonderfully written. Evelyn
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:27:00 PM
Trees are always a fascination to me, love the variety of shapes and colours. This is a remarkably beautiful poem and what a picture, what a tree… Belle
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