The Tree In My Garden

what is it
to eat from your spoon
and drink from your cup
to feel your lips
from cigarettes lit up
to pretend that 
we're not on a date
we follow the rules
but it is way too late
we're living the lives
of a hollywood tale
"The Forbiden Love"
where forbidding fails
slow burns the furnace
of passion to pursue
kisses filled with desire
what was old now new
forbidden once, forbidden twice
forbidden three times
forbidden by common sense,
the forsaken, and by God
but forward we take the steps
love growing stronger 
marches on
next week there will be
something else
something she will do
and i'll will follow just the same
to show my love is true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beer Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Very passionate,John. Now I have an observation. It seems to me you are doing a good job of living up to your name. HA HA Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile
Shango Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 5:30 AM
The quagmire of the heart has many gems in mud, and love ever adorns the twinkle of the stars. Love is never forbidden only the desire to own it. An inspired write.
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March 17, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Lots of passion in this poem. God Bless Phyl
Ford Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:22 PM
That was a great expression John it reminds me of my past relationships in a way I now see as part of my folly, great job
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Oh Johnny you know she loves you and does her best. Awesome write my friend. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 9:19 AM
I really enjoy this one about illicit love, John! Great title for it! Luv, Andrea
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February 18, 2010 at 5:51 PM
nice poem here John . Hey i like your take on the oceans in your comment to me. Nice poetic way to look at it. Is it part of one of your poems? If it is not , it probably should be,/// thanks Robert
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February 18, 2010 at 4:45 PM
you know you love me-inspite of my moods! {;-o}
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:43 PM
An emotional expression of luv John .. a creative write from your gifted pen ... thankxxx for your very special comments on my poetry reads the past few days... I have always been a partner in my own prayer chain at my Church.. prayer is the universal language of all believers.. I have company from out of town for a few days so will be on and off site when I can.. appreciate your friendship and loving support always.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Very nice. Thank you for your comment today. Ellen
Chircop Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Very passionate John,,I love it when you let the emotions flow,you do it so well,,great poem,,beautiful..Charma:)
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Interesting love write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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