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The Tree- My bark is worn from time and life My steady branches have withstood much strife The life blood that raged in my youth Its edges raw and at times uncouth Time has polished and as steel has hardened As I have stood watch faithfully in my garden My saplings I have sheltered and nourished Their tiny sprouts have grown and flourished My work here is almost done and I was content to stand silent in the sun However, one day as I stood alone Came a carpenter with hands gentle and strong He looked past my peeling ragged bark and Found my barely beating heart. He has caused me to dream of my youth again Of beauty, peace and the passion of men I am his project to mold and to make A challenge only he is equipped to take I stand here now curious to see What this craftsman can make of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/19/2015 6:42:00 PM
Tina:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:40:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, Tina - A pleasure to read your first great poem, thank you chose to share it here with us - I wish you a nice day :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:48:00 PM
HI TINA, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:49:00 PM
Tina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:48:00 PM
Welcome!! Hope you enjoy this forum as i have it is a great place to get encouragement about your writings. I love this write.
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Tina Anderson
Date: 2/10/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thank you! I have rarely shared my work so this is new for me. I appreciate your encouragement.

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