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The Tree

The Tree A tree stands tall, in the forest is blended I sit and admire it's strength, simply splendid For each of us has had time to take heed Time to be fruitful, give, and time to need The wind picks up I hear it call in a distance It's the path I once chose, the one with the most resistance Oh woe, to my life of trouble and despair indeed... as the wind redundantly shakes the branch with one last plead Storms come and the rain soaks into the ground The lightning, the memories flash all around Like a breath, in an instant the calm sets the atmosphere Don't look at the storm, what was look at what has appeared Some of the branches are left weakly unattached It's the part to let go, the part of the past The sunlight now shines on the tree, it drinks the rain Ready to grow, flourish and blossom; remembering no pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/1/2014 8:18:00 PM
Interesting combination of end rhyme, rhythm and a little internal rhyme too. Cool poem and good message.
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Date: 9/27/2013 6:14:00 PM
† Not To Seem Cold But To Be Honest I Wouldn't Let You Hold Me Too Close, Sweet Precious Lucinda ˜ We Crossed That Bridge A Bit Back ? At This Point Then It Would Seem Amid My Mind As If Hulk Hogan Were Holding Myself And Actually, I Am Not Much Of A Hulk Fan If You Know What I Mean ? Smile, Although Friendship Seems Well Within Reach And Much More Fitting I Might Say Unto This Guy Here ˜ Wonderful Analogy Philsophy As Perspective Quite Inspiring Truly A Tree In Wisdom Hope And Ready To Yield Her Abundance In Fruitfulness We Might Imagine ? Love, John
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Cindy Lu
Date: 9/27/2013 9:21:00 PM
I wholeheartedly believe to be molded as Our God does daily that we need to stay soft and easily worked between our loving Father's finger tips.. Truthfully, I am not into the synical type too much these days. I have to keep myself from trying to save everyone else and just live. Furthermore, it is not wrong to look through the bad and see the simplicities that are quite beauiful to me. I'm a basic person. I'm not high maintanance, but somehow the dress I bought to wear on a lunch date will not make me as happy when I put it on tomorrow. Thanks for reminding me of the past. Fortunately, I do not live in it as some...
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Cindy Lu
Date: 9/27/2013 9:15:00 PM
It is a bit of a strike on my feminity to say the least for you to have adressed me in this manner.. These things need to be taken up privately. Some things I have learned along the way, is when you see someone having a rough time.. a gentle hug does much more than anything. Also my demeanor has changed when I got through a very rough time in my life and I am glad I was here to expres myself theraeutically.. too bad I was llike that in conversations online with you huh :(
Date: 9/27/2013 10:43:00 AM
"Don't look at the storm, what was. Look at what has appeared." The most vital line of this poem. Powerful & fierce.
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Cindy Lu
Date: 9/28/2013 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Drake. Your comments are always very uplifting to this writer.. :) Cindy
Date: 9/26/2013 4:41:00 PM
like the tree we weather the storms too....nicely penned Cindy
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Cindy Lu
Date: 9/28/2013 5:40:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate that. Cindy

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