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" BEAUTY'S DISPLAY" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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The Tree

Foliage's proud show

Branches' display of grandeur

Unseen toiling roots!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
         28 May 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wanter Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 4:06 PM
I can see you gazing at that tree when you wrote this. Haiku of nature is what I understand haiku to be.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:08 PM
You are right dear, Sunlite the tree gave the inspiration but the thought was deeper than the roots of it! Thank you for lovely visit!
Sands Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Beautiful to read and see today! Thanks for sharing :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Happy you liked it dear friend, Heidi! Thank you so much!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:01 AM
I see your toil for those roots, in every breathtaking photo of your glorious rooftop garden dear Demetrios! Lovely haiku <3 xomo!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Maureen it so good to see you my fellow Canadian. Thank you so much for lovely visit and comment!
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:56 AM
when roots are sturdy, the finest of harvest blooms and ripens... splendid truism from your own volumes of adages, demetrios... love the visual as well.. huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 1:11 PM
nette, each day you show up the sun shines! Thank you my friend for your dear and honest comment! God bless you!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:22 AM
I can apply your deep write to devoted parents who never spare an effort to instill values and everything good into their offsprings.. Rooted lofty trees symbol of endurance and self denial.. A warm shade under which we thrive and rejoice bliss and blessings.. Wise and brilliant piece of art as always! A great joy to read. Stay safe and blessed dear Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Excellent deduction my dearest friend, Besma. We also could see Man and God, the work the good people do while others get the credit and many more situation! Thank you for your noble words and support my friend! God bless you as always!
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:20 AM
There is a source of strength that toils behind the scene for every success--well captured my friend, Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:43 AM
True my noble friend, Vijay! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:09 AM
- The heart of the tree - Beautiful dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Thank you dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your precious visits and comments! Hugsxxx
Cunningham Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:58 AM
Sometimes we only see the finished product not realising the hard work that went into producing it. Your beautiful roof garden comes to mind Demetrios. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:14 AM
Very well put my friend, Tom! Thank you for your delightful visit and comment!
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