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The Treadmill

You set my soul on fire like a stack of straw. You were there to set the blaze, but where were you when it became ash. In the evidence of absence, I realize i was a fool, trying to get by on my belly. Not being noticed by the swarm of emotion that is love, i crawl as fast as i can. Running on that treadmill, going no place all the time. So i rebuild, and look for a new match to strike me. Please, go ahead and light me again baby. Make it burn, and then say goodbye. You cute little pyro.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/19/2010 6:19:00 AM
Very nice poem...Marty
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Date: 1/18/2010 6:44:00 PM
Thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry Joe but may I return the compliments with your absolutely elegant choice of words for this poem... I would list the form as Free Verse since no rhyming sequence and too short for a Narrative.. luv it ... looking forward to reading more creative writes from your gifted pen.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. by the way.. u can check out the blogs page for us premium members who post blogs.. u are able to read and comment there too.. luv..
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