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it's baggage on our mind when we'd prefer to be free we at once realize we've become caretakers weighed down with the burden of responsiblity look and resist the craving to own enjoy things in the moment it's surprising how little we need seek the freedom to be open to what comes our way unburdened and unencumbered stuff is the anchor to our past we deserve to allow ourselves the freedom to be free AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 6/3/2025 2:47:00 PM
Keep a few things…toss some, be free!
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Date: 6/4/2025 4:40:00 AM
feels good to do so ~

Book: Reflection on the Important Things