The Transparency of War Paint

Submerged skin deep
in solace,
you play trickery
in your silent rebellion.
Soil claims sanctuary 
on defiant children
like your veil lingers.
You're still sweet.
Sheepish smile behind war paint,
we're not so different 
you and I.
I too have bled music
during my vow of silence
and given myself up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Young Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 12:59 AM
Beautiful....loved it!
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July 18, 2013 at 10:54 PM
Very beautiful poem!!
Fulton Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Arthur
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July 17, 2013 at 10:33 AM
.... Hey you, Kathryn ... you write very well .... do not wait a year for your next .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Fulton Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Haha thank you Anne =)
Tacito Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Hi, Kathryn! This is my 1st time reading your work and I'm genuinely impressed. Your word flow & message here are quite deep. I love how you ended this. Strong stuff! I look forward to reading more of your work!
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July 17, 2013 at 9:49 AM
Thank you =)
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