The Transformation

Shed the clay that strives to be an anchor
Tarnishing, but for awhile, the dreams of man
Addled hopes can rise in the morning’s mist
Instead of languishing beneath despair
Replenished strength awakens the spirit
With a simple drink from the Milky Way
And flirtations with Perseus opens up
Yielding beauty in heaven’s realm
The grave that holds yet, a soul to Earth,
Owns the judgment of defeat
There is none, but one, that must decide
How to build on wishes made
Even when the faltering of darkness
Shadows well the light of faith
There is a spark that burns the night
As gravity shows force, to mark a trail
Rise! Rise, you fallen man!
Strive to be among the stars


-Virginia Mitchell

Contest- STAIRWAY TO THE STARS (Acrostic)
Sponsor- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:09 PM
Yes well written Virginia,, and my congratulations on your spot in the contest today.)
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Virginia. Love Carol
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February 26, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations Virginia.Beautiful Acrostic.Love it!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Congrats Virginia on a sweet success for this remarkable entry luv.. thankxxx for supporting too.. luv..
Northeast Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 10:39 PM
That is truly wonderful Virginia- and thank you for your kind words also, Bren : )
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:57 PM
wow, what a GREAT job you did with this challenge. I think you should make the letters stand out at the beginning of each line so everyone can see that you spelled Stairway to the Stars going down. The message of this one is outstanding.
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Yes, one surely must strive to reach higher..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like winners' cirlce work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara.
Rhinem Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Smile ˜ Oh I Surely shall be Amongst the stars * Putting a few of they in my pouch * Love, John!:) *
Kelly Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Clever acrostic , Virginia , finishing with a positive command . Tks for the kind words ..
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Sorry I missed this lovely write so many transformative owrks here. Thanks so much for stopping by. Light & love
Neels Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 4:38 AM
This is a beauty Virginia and I absolutely love the theme you have chosen :) all the best for the contest :) Wilma
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