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The Tranquil Sea

I love to go to the tranquil sea a special place with treasures for me I walk the beach, feet touching the sand feeling the waves tickle as I stand I spot a beautiful blue starfish A sign of luck, I should make a wish I want to grab it, but leave it be Let it bring joy for others to see As I walk away, I see it smile I know saving its life was worthwhile I look back, see it wink and now gone I hope it has safely left, moved on I realize the lesson today To admire nature and walk away Time to head back from the tranquil sea Elated by what it gave to me 4/27/2020 Contest: Couplet - any theme, any length Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:25:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Dear Heart's contest, Tania - I hope you and yours are staying safe and sound. Blessings and keep up the great writing, My Friend! :o) <3
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Date: 5/6/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Greg, I hope you are well and staying safe too!
Date: 5/5/2020 7:16:00 PM
Tania, wonderful, congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/6/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my placement!
Date: 5/4/2020 4:47:00 PM
Tania, i sure enjoyed reading this. I, too, love the ocean, and had an experience identical to this with a starfish. It was a much better choice to leave it to its environment and enjoy the rich memory of the moment. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/4/2020 6:03:00 PM
Thank you John and thank you for your visit!
Date: 5/4/2020 11:31:00 AM
Love the verse, Tania, great imagery. Congratulations on your placement win in Dear Heart’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/4/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 5/4/2020 7:53:00 AM
Love the whimsy of this one! I held a starfish when I was in Alaskan waters.
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Date: 5/4/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 4/27/2020 3:55:00 PM
Enjoyed the read Tania--your poem is elegant in its simplicity, evoking love of nature.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/27/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!

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