The Train To the Paradise

On the death bed for cessation, a platform free from brawl, 
I perceive in peace my debilitating breath.
And give off a brief one as I hear my call,
The one from the train to the paradise.

My soul boards it on, waving a good-bye to my body and kins.
The journey commences, the patrons graciously welcome me with smiles.
I gladly accept the offered window seat to witness the realm free from sins,
Inhaling the pristine air of contentment.

Breaching the clouds, up above the sky we go,
The chirping of birds, the whistle of the engine a merry music to our ears.
The spruce of blossoms of all the shades that we know,
A pleasant company all along the path.

The track so well embellished with assorted vines.
The aroma of satiation by the sight of mighty green grooves,
The breathtaking millisecond vision sends shivers down our spines,
Of the fiery magnificent flight of the phoenix.

Revelation of the antiquities, is more a shocking miracle than delight.
The Unicorn's excursion although contradicts it being mystique.
Is crystal clear to our eyes, to our intellects with dynamic energy we are forced to fight.
Such is the greatness of the train journey.

The train ceases and the Train-master affirms the journey concludes at the moment.
My face dims down, I wish it would go on forever.
My most awaited end I've reached, but a great transition is encountered by my temperament. 
Once, only for once again,
I want to travel in 'The train to the Paradise'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/13/2024 12:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:09:00 PM
Nishant Patil, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:48:00 PM
NP,,, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/14/2015 12:44:00 AM
Thank you all for warm wishes. I will make sure more of such poems are coming to delight you vivid readers.
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Date: 8/11/2015 1:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nishant! Awesome poem!
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/14/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anulaxmi.
Date: 8/10/2015 11:51:00 PM
NISHANT, NICE WIN...SKAT
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/14/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 8/10/2015 8:12:00 AM
Nishant, sometimes it's as much about the journey as the destination. Lovely poem.
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/14/2015 12:50:00 AM
Indeed it is James. Thanks for your appreciation.
Date: 8/10/2015 1:22:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Nishant! Great work!
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/14/2015 12:50:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma.
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