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The Train

we took a trip to see thing whips pop it was a train hop when to zoos it was fun too we made other stop had to shop it was around the plains on THE TRAIN

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Date: 6/7/2013 3:18:00 AM
Kurtis, This poem has confused me, if you had spent more time on this and proof read it I would have awarded you a higher rating. all the best. John
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