Kash Poet Poet Free verse

The Trail of a Raindrop

Sudden rain brought me
under your umbrella
for the first time.
For the first time
you were so close to me
with your fragrance.
The umbrella was
not big enough
to cover both of us.
A raindrop was trickling 
down your forehead.
I was following it's trail
without listening to you.
Your words couldn't touch me
like the raindrops falling outside.
The trail of that raindrop
uncovers some secrets for me,
your eyes were bluer
than I thought and your
dimples deeper.
I discovered a beauty spot
below your left ear lobe.

Today,I know about all your 
beauty spots....
But still now in a rainy day
I want to walk with you
under the same umbrella.



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Nette Onclaud August 27, 2025 at 4:33 PM kashhh! a beautiful day with cheers from you...been a long while. do share how things are with you...God bless and huggs

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2025 at 4:12 PM Wow it was fun to get a visit from you today. Soupmail me how things are going on your life. Any more success in the haiku world for you?

Beata Agustin September 14, 2024 at 4:47 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Joe Maverick May 17, 2023 at 3:54 AM You covered a lot of sense awareness in the Umberella of this Kash..Well put pieces of Thought.'

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2023 at 12:57 PM Back here to say thanks for dropping in on me the other day, if only just to see Jewelry. haha. I hope your life is going great. Are you getting famous with your haiku yet? I sure hope so.

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2022 at 3:27 PM hey there, Kash, So nice of you to pay me a visit . I do believe I've seen ALL your poems. Let me go see what your number one is and if it's remained that way over the years.

Krish Radhakrishna October 3, 2020 at 1:33 PM a very nice one Kash. Look up my poem called 'remember that downpour,' that has similar thought content. Well done.

John Watt September 1, 2020 at 9:23 AM This is romantic and intimate, Kash. Every new rain reminds you of that brief encounter and that scent and those facial features. Lovely poetry, enjoyed this very much.

Sand Blown July 1, 2020 at 2:23 PM ….a bard without barb....writ right on.... stan sand

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM Hi, Kash! Waiting for MORE GEMS!!!

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2020 at 2:39 PM the indelible mark of a kashi poetry... i'm here again thanking you for coming around...hey, visit us more often...huggs

Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2020 at 9:20 AM I too am amazed how anyone could read this piece and not comment. Perhaps the world for a moment went temporarily blind. This piece caused me to sigh. Blessings poet.

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2020 at 5:36 PM I don't understand . You have over a hundred views and only MY comment. Gosh, Kash, what is wrong with the people here?? Thanks for stopping by today to see my simple little poem on my two kids.

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2020 at 2:21 PM ahhh, so romantic, Kash. It's wonderful to see this FRESH new post from you. Please put up more. Maybe you have more free time now to come over here with us Soupers again!!!