The Trail of a Raindrop

Sudden rain brought me under your umbrella for the first time. For the first time you were so close to me with your fragrance. The umbrella was not big enough to cover both of us. A raindrop was trickling down your forehead. I was following it's trail without listening to you. Your words couldn't touch me like the raindrops falling outside. The trail of that raindrop uncovers some secrets for me, your eyes were bluer than I thought and your dimples deeper. I discovered a beauty spot below your left ear lobe. Today,I know about all your beauty spots.... But still now in a rainy day I want to walk with you under the same umbrella. **************************

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Date: 8/27/2025 4:33:00 PM
kashhh! a beautiful day with cheers from you...been a long while. do share how things are with you...God bless and huggs
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Date: 3/14/2025 4:12:00 PM
Wow it was fun to get a visit from you today. Soupmail me how things are going on your life. Any more success in the haiku world for you?
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Date: 9/14/2024 4:47:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/17/2023 3:54:00 AM
You covered a lot of sense awareness in the Umberella of this Kash..Well put pieces of Thought.'
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Date: 3/14/2023 12:57:00 PM
Back here to say thanks for dropping in on me the other day, if only just to see Jewelry. haha. I hope your life is going great. Are you getting famous with your haiku yet? I sure hope so.
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Date: 3/19/2022 3:27:00 PM
hey there, Kash, So nice of you to pay me a visit . I do believe I've seen ALL your poems. Let me go see what your number one is and if it's remained that way over the years.
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Date: 10/3/2020 1:33:00 PM
a very nice one Kash. Look up my poem called 'remember that downpour,' that has similar thought content. Well done.
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Date: 9/1/2020 9:23:00 AM
This is romantic and intimate, Kash. Every new rain reminds you of that brief encounter and that scent and those facial features. Lovely poetry, enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 7/1/2020 2:23:00 PM
….a bard without barb....writ right on.... stan sand
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Date: 6/27/2020 4:25:00 PM
Hi, Kash! Waiting for MORE GEMS!!!
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Date: 5/10/2020 2:39:00 PM
the indelible mark of a kashi poetry... i'm here again thanking you for coming around...hey, visit us more often...huggs
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Date: 4/19/2020 9:20:00 AM
I too am amazed how anyone could read this piece and not comment. Perhaps the world for a moment went temporarily blind. This piece caused me to sigh. Blessings poet.
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:36:00 PM
I don't understand . You have over a hundred views and only MY comment. Gosh, Kash, what is wrong with the people here?? Thanks for stopping by today to see my simple little poem on my two kids.
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Date: 4/3/2020 2:21:00 PM
ahhh, so romantic, Kash. It's wonderful to see this FRESH new post from you. Please put up more. Maybe you have more free time now to come over here with us Soupers again!!!
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