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The Trail Ceased

Resting is not coming easy this day, Shrouded in mourning once again, No tender morsels left like crumbs, Simply for having normal feelings, When do I bow out of the race? I never reach the finish line, The trail of tenderness ceased.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2011 5:45:00 AM
susanne and brendan do it to..to make me look foolish and make me look like a fake prophet..deny when I am accurate..I am getting use to carrying the cross you people force me to carry with denying things that God tells me..I mean I already suffer enough..but that is fine you guys load some more onto me..what the hell? she can take more..
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Date: 5/4/2011 5:41:00 AM
i know you are the Chris the fox poet..but anyhow..I am getting used to this..i mean denying prophecy or whichever..lonely life..
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:37:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mourning. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:04:00 PM
how poignant and lovely this is, mist! oh, and i like your name! :) huggs, nette
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