The Toy

The crying kid repeats 
The demand to his papa 
He wants a toy 
‘’A gun and knife’’ 
A Hollywood movie is 
Still progressing at the TV.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 17, 2012 at 5:11 PM
I love the honesty of your pen..JL
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June 16, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Yes, its true, kids pick from TV. Well said. tfs
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June 16, 2012 at 6:38 AM
thank you .jk
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June 15, 2012 at 9:51 AM
thank you .jk
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June 15, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Yes, children take lessons from what they see on TV. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem to day. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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