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The Touch of the Artist

The Touch Of The Artist The curtains were drawn aside I gasped with dropping jaw Spellbound at the magnificence Of the shimmery gigantic golden eagle Overpowering the stage With massive open wings To fly above the clouds The auditorium bedazzled With its looming presence Its black eyes and hooked nose Tilted frequently side to side Preying for parents In the audience seated A pyramid of tiny golden eaglets Hailed a welcome song On their school's annual show Having eyed their meat With a single swoop They drive their emotions to a teary edge Ripping their genetic hearts with pride My heart commended The visionaries laboriously working Behind the scenes in an endeavour To create a raison de etre For parents to feel proud of The tenacity of their children Which phoenix like Is reborn with The touch of the artist October 3, 2015 Contest: The Golden Eagle Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton * An ode to teachers for carving out the personalities of children who like an eagle learn to fly above the clouds while the rest of the birds seek shelter in the rain. They train them to be eagle eyed, to be focussed, to rip through obstacles with tenacity, to turn their dreams into reality and create a raison de etre for themselves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/11/2015 5:36:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to not only the eagle but also to the endeavors of the important role teachers play in the molding of a childs mind. Wonderful! #7 One of my daughter's is an educator.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/11/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Connie! I'm sure your daughter would love to read. Thanks for appreciating!
Date: 10/4/2015 1:05:00 PM
wow, you are a great writer and I loved the way that you showed us a different slant on this challenge, taking it to another level by describing teachers' efforts to inspire children!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/4/2015 1:10:00 PM
Andrea, you are so appreciative even when I don't live up to the the sponsors expectations! Friends like you add more breaths to life! Love and thanks!

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