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The Touch of the Artist

The Touch Of The Artist

The curtains were drawn aside
I gasped with dropping jaw
Spellbound at the magnificence
Of the shimmery gigantic golden eagle 
Overpowering the stage
With massive open wings 
To fly above the clouds

The auditorium bedazzled
With its looming presence
Its black eyes and hooked nose
Tilted frequently side to side
Preying for parents 
In the audience seated

A pyramid of tiny golden eaglets
Hailed a welcome song
On their school's annual show
Having eyed their meat
With a single swoop 
They drive their emotions to a teary edge
Ripping their genetic hearts with pride 

My heart commended
The visionaries laboriously working
Behind the scenes in an endeavour
To create a raison de etre
For parents to feel proud of
The tenacity of their children
Which phoenix like 
Is reborn with
The touch of the artist

October 3, 2015
Contest: The Golden Eagle
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

* An ode to teachers for carving out the personalities of children who like an eagle learn to fly above the clouds while the rest of the birds seek shelter in the rain. They train them to be eagle eyed, to be focussed, to rip through obstacles with tenacity, to turn their dreams into reality and create a raison de etre for themselves

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Date: 10/11/2015 5:36:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to not only the eagle but also to the endeavors of the important role teachers play in the molding of a childs mind. Wonderful! #7 One of my daughter's is an educator.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/11/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Connie! I'm sure your daughter would love to read. Thanks for appreciating!
Date: 10/4/2015 1:05:00 PM
wow, you are a great writer and I loved the way that you showed us a different slant on this challenge, taking it to another level by describing teachers' efforts to inspire children!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/4/2015 1:10:00 PM
Andrea, you are so appreciative even when I don't live up to the the sponsors expectations! Friends like you add more breaths to life! Love and thanks!

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