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The Touch

The Touch A spirit grew within ourselves and reached out to be caught upon the air of pure ideas, a mathematics sought. Reaching up to touch unknowns and validate our being we found the ones celestial a confidence and trust a sight beyond our seeing. Reaching up our palms were touched by love that’s so divine and viewing just our living selves a perfect edifice we came to know that it exists by a planned design. Belief and thought have framed the world. gave it balance and controls. as well as structure for a life and blueprint for the soul’s. 7/18/17 A Poem Honoring Spirituality Poetry Contest Sponsor Caren Krutsinger

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/9/2020 12:35:00 AM

Lovely, Janis. Congrats on your win.

L. J. Carber

Date: 5/7/2020 12:35:00 PM

Congrats Janis on your win!

Janis Thompson
Date: 5/7/2020 3:32:00 PM

Thank L. J.

John Watt

Date: 5/7/2020 10:41:00 AM

A wonderful insight into your world of spirituality, Janis. I liked the line "a sight beyond our seeing". Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John

Janis Thompson
Date: 5/7/2020 3:32:00 PM

Thanks John. This was an old number that still had value. I appreciate your comments.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/31/2017 3:13:00 AM

I like this poem very much. Congratulations on your win. The culmination in 'balance', 'control', structure' and 'blueprint is decisive and yet leaves room for other opinions. Great, Kai

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/1/2017 11:45:00 AM

I think millions of years ago, man came in touch with a benevolent celestial beings that left us faith. Thanks for your placement and the great contest theme.